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Sunday, December 14, 2008

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Carnival of Rust
By Poets of the Fall
Carnival of Rust
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At first there was darkness, cold yet inviting

A moonless night with no purpose or direction

Whilst sunlight was a stark reminder of existence

So we hid behind a carefully crafted veil

 

It was a drop of wine, when our sanity spilt over the brim

Subtle hints where recognition failed

Waiving every warning sign, rushing along

Rearranging messy lives, realizing reality

 

Dancing images in a puddle of water

Vaguely familiar – a broken reflection?

And a sudden clarity of thought, void of hesitation

A story emerged, fiction with facts none but us could see

 

Shedding inhibitions, and fake masks

Taking the long journey back to innocence

Surprisingly shortened by a shadowy figure – an alter self

 

Raging fires threatened to burn our castle

How they underestimated the rain that would fall

Quenching our thirst, and dampening their hopes

Binding us together, stronger and closer than ever before

 

Intimacy as never felt before, a trust to beat all odds

A death wish, a kiss to instill life in this hollow body

Ending with a pleasant jolt, of dying in your eyes

 

Now the moonlight feels warm against my cold skin

And each whisper of breeze touches my soul

The heat seems mild, a halo that surrounds me

Breathing your name till I breathe my last
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I didn't know you blogged. I loved the imagery in this poem and there were a number of expressions that were really original and beautiful. Please write more!
Posted 6/30/2009 6:46 PM by IdeaSmith (site) - reply


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